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One Brilliant Arc (OBA)'s avatar

I love what you are doing with this story! There is a depth behind these words and characters that I can feel. It seems that this is a story a lot of people need right now to not feel alone when their inner turmoil meets cultural conflicts. Keep writing—this one matters.

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Parth Shah's avatar

Whoa thanks for the feedback!

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One Brilliant Arc (OBA)'s avatar

Of course! If you ever need support or help along your journey getting this story to the finish line, feel free to reach out to the editors and story coaches at OBA Media. :) These are the kinds of stories we want to help get out into the world!

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connie's avatar

okay wow this chapter grabbed me. reads like a story about restraint, identity, and the cost of being the guy who always tries to do the right thing...even when no one’s watching.

subscribed. let’s go.

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Parth Shah's avatar

Whoa, thanks for the feedback!

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